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Wednesday, March 09, 2005

MEANDERINGS

She's flying so high
Crashing so hard
Up in the sky
Smashed by the car
Spinning around
Living in chaos
Hitting the ground
Then up and away off
Bought and sold
And bought again
Feeling old
Then what should have been.

posted by whitechoclatespacegg @ 10:54 AM  

13 Comments:

  • At 1:56 AM, March 10, 2005, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    Who wrote this a freaking elementary school kid? This is the worst poem I've ever read, have ever even gone to college. If not, go please. Before you kill us with these stupid poems.

     

  • At 8:31 AM, March 10, 2005, Blogger joe said…

    This reminds me of that delightful film Napolean Dynamite. Kip is a great poet! I'm glad you wrote a tribute to Kip.

    Anony-Boy oughta try to write a poem in the style of Kip. Since A-boy has zero talent...I don't think we'll see any!













    ki

     

  • At 5:37 PM, March 10, 2005, Blogger whitechoclatespacegg said…

    I don't know how to even respond to anonymous right now, I can't understand what the post says, seeing as I must not have gone to college.
    "This is the worst poem I've ever read, have ever even gone to college."
    What is the missing article here? Can anyone tell me?
    Here's a clue jerkoff, since you obviously need one, if you insist on insulting other peoples' intelligence you could at least write a comprehensible sentence.... or didn't you ever go to college?

     

  • At 1:32 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

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  • At 1:34 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

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  • At 1:38 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

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  • At 1:42 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

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  • At 1:46 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

    Eat it!

     

  • At 1:56 AM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

    Hey anony-Boy! I know this about poets...they are all pretentious stuck up and snotty! You must know more about poets than we do since you are all of those things!

     

  • At 5:48 PM, March 27, 2005, Anonymous Anonymous said…

    I've written a lot of poems you asshole! Obviously you should know that because you have been to my site before. Let me give you a clue, Joe. I am a gorgeous ass female and I attend a University that one of your "friends" has wanted to attend. I know about a lot more than poetry.

     

  • At 11:41 PM, March 27, 2005, Blogger joe said…

    Anony, I don't know who you are. I've not been to your site. I don't know what university you speak of...

     

  • At 6:56 AM, March 28, 2005, Blogger whitechoclatespacegg said…

    Like how to be an annoying Ass? You must have wrote the book because here you are doing it again.

     

  • At 9:51 PM, March 28, 2005, Blogger joe said…

    Well, well anony. It seems you have me at a disadvantage. You seem to know who I am...but I don't know who you are.

    You stated that I had been to your site. I informed you that I had not. You then come back and tell me I have been to your FRIEND'S site. Going to your "friend's" site and going to your site are two different things. I suggest you get your story correct.

    As for leaving comments on your "friend's" site...I have visited very few of these little blogs...so...I'm guessing you know us. I think the joke is up. Tell us who you are...if you have the guts!

     

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